AI Policy
My General Stance
AI can be an effective tool in the hands of someone who knows how to use it. When poorly prompted, it doesn’t edit or write well. Since I’m an editor and a writer, I know how to effectively use AI to generate good output, and I know how to recognize what part of the output is good, what is decent with some editing, and what is garbage.
On the other hand, if you gave me a hammer, I couldn’t build a house—or anything really. Like any tool AI’s results depend on the skill of the person using it. It needs a skilled professional editor every step of the way.
AI isn’t a replacement editor. I say that not because it’s my profession (though that matters too), but because the results wouldn’t meet professional standards.
In the hands of someone who does have that skillset, it can elevate their editing, allowing them to give the author even more insightful edits in the time and budget allotted.
And this is how I use AI: as a tool in my editor belt, not as a shortcut to the hard work of real editing.
Ways I Would Never Use AI
How I Might Use AI
I won’t necessarily use AI for every one of these tasks, but these are tasks I may use it for to assist with editing.
Generate chapter-by-chapter outlines with bulleted list of key details per chapter (fiction and nonfiction)
I always create this data, with or without AI. Before AI, I did it myself. Now, AI can do it quicker, freeing up my time and brain for actual editing.
Having this data helps me:
- Suggest reorganization edits for better flow in a nonfiction book.
- Analyze a novel’s story arc and spot what beats are missing, whether beats are in the wrong place, what scenes may not be necessary, etc.
Generate helpful guides for novels (fiction)
Developmentally editing fiction requires keeping track of character, setting, and timeline details. This is something I do every time I edit a novel. If I have AI do it for me, this frees up my brain for more actual editing.
Identify how a plot meets a specific plot structure (fiction)
After my first developmental editing pass on a novel, I identify what plot structure is best for analysis: Hero’s Journey, Freytag’s pyramid, 3-act structure, Save the Cat 15-beats, Fichtean Curve, 7-point structure, 5-act structure, Dan Harmon’s story circle, etc.
I already have an idea based on the notes I took of where it may be missing the mark in terms of structure, but I could see it being helpful to ask AI this and comparing to what I saw and noticed. Sometimes it helps identify gaps a bit more clearly to talk this out with a partner (aka AI). It saves me time from having to conduct a full-scale analysis and instead I can use this analysis to help me focus in certain areas during my second pass.
Check visual imagery (fiction)
As an aphant, I don’t visualize. So it’s hard for me to ascertain whether the visual imagery is clear enough for the reader. So if I’m having a hard time following it, I can ask AI if it’s clear and it’s just me and my visualization issues.
Check understanding based on audience (nonfiction)
I don’t know everything. I just don’t. So sometimes I flag something as potentially confusing that may actually be clear to your intended audience. So I can use AI to check myself, asking it if it’s just me or if [insert audience] might struggle to understand as well.
If it is just me, AI can explain it in a way I understand to better inform my edits.
Suggest headlines or subheadlines (nonfiction)
If I see a section that could benefit from a headline or subheadline, I may ask AI to help me with ideas for the wording of said headline. I’m the one that noticed the need for a heading, but I’m not always the best at how to word it. Of course, as the author, you can reject the suggested headline and write your own. You’re just using my suggestion (if I came up with myself) or AI’s suggestion (if I used it) as a springboard for you.
Help me frame feedback
I want to ensure my feedback is helpful and clear, so if I’m worried that my explanation was a bit too convoluted or not clear to one unfamiliar with the concept, I can turn to AI to help me clarify the feedback.
Also sometimes I know something is off but can’t quite put my finger on what or notice the lower-level issue and fail to see how it’s connected to a bigger issue. So I can also use AI to talk it out and help me more clearly pinpoint and ensure I’m finding the root of the problem to best help you and your reader.
Suggest rewrites for a specific craft tool based on my observations of what was needed (fiction and nonfiction)
My editing style is not to just point out issues but to give you examples of how you might fix the issue I spotted. I then flag later instances of the same issue for you to fix yourself (fiction) or continue with hands-on (nonfiction).
Sometimes I come up with an example right away. Other times it takes me a while, and even after I do come up with one, it may not be as strong as it could be. If given enough time, I could certainly get there, but in order to give the best example, if I feel I need some assistance, I will ask AI how it would rewrite my suggestion based on [insert craft technique].
Before I do so, I feed it my blog or other teaching tools about that craft technique to increase the likelihood of a good output.
Some craft techniques I model and may turn to AI to help me model:
Fiction
- Creating deeper character interiority
- Using free indirect speech
- Rewriting to show instead of tell
- Fixing head hopping
- Fixing info dumping
- Ensuring good sentence fluency
Nonfiction
- Ensuring good Sentence fluency
- Fixing wordy or convoluted sentences
- Creating effective transitions
- Adding in content to fully explain the concept
Bottom Line
AI helps me work more efficiently and thoughtfully, but every decision still goes through me. Rest assured, you’re not getting an AI edit. You’re getting my professional edit, enhanced by selective use of technology.
