Editing for Fiction Authors

General Information

You’ve poured your heart into creating characters, weaving a plot, and bringing your story to life. And you’ve thoroughly self-edited it. What an incredible accomplishment!

Katie Chambers sitting on her sofa, with her glasses on, reading from a book.

So what’s next?

➜ Need some more guided self-editing, look into my manuscript checkup service.
If you’ve taken it as far as you can, it’s time to hire a professional editor.

We know these steps can feel nerve-wracking and even trigger imposter syndrome. But you can do this, and we can help. We’ll be honest yet encouraging, a beacon guiding you through the editing journey.

And since your story has the power to transform lives, you too are a beacon. We make your beacon shine by strengthening plot and characters (developmental editing) and improving your narrative technique and reducing errors (copyediting).

Let’s build a partnership to make your book the best it can be in the time allotted.

Genres We Edit

I have studied best practices for each of these genres:

  • Young adult fantasy, dystopian, supernatural, mystery, and thriller
  • Adult dystopian, mystery, thriller (clean content)
  • Children’s picture books and chapter books
  • Middle-grade novels

In addition to the above genres, my team members can edit:

  • Historical fiction (young adult and adult)
  • Closed-door romance
  • Poetry
  • Science fiction (young adult and adult)

*We do not work with horror, literary fiction, dark romance, erotica, or graphic novels, but I’m connected with people who do so email me for recommendations.

Resources For You

Visit my writer’s resources center for articles and ebooklets focused on helping you.

My resource center offers resources in a variety of categories:

  • Fiction writing tips
  • Revising your manuscript
  • General writing help tips
  • Grammar and punctuation help
  • Networking and learning communities
  • Working with a book coach or ghostwriter
  • Working with an editor
  • Self-publishing tips
  • Book marketing
  • Legal help for authors

Editor Team

As of 2026, Beacon Point works on some fiction in an angecy model.

What that means is some projects I will edit myself and some will be edited solely by another team number.

All my editors have been thoroughly vetted to ensure they match my style. No two editors will edit anything the same way, but these editors all edit following Beacon Point’s style and quality.

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Rates and Services

Getting one service includes two and a half passes. The combined package includes three passes, and getting each service separately gives you four and a half passes. Learn more about the process and our editing style


Rates depend on the depth of editing needed. After a free sample edit (1,300 words or less), I will determine your rate.

Developmental Editing

Rate: $0.03–$0.05 per word

Deals with big-picture issues. This includes in-text edits, comments, and an editorial letter.

  • Ensuring it meets genre conventions and works for the intended audience

  • Offering suggestions to fix plot holes and pacing issues

  • Strengthening characters: making sure they are fully developed, have clear motivations and goals, and stay consistent

  • Ensuring story has a strong, compelling core conflict

  • Pointing out and offering suggestions to fix info dumping, head-hopping, and point of view inconsistences (also included in copyediting)

  • Ensuring a good balance of showing and telling (also included in copyediting)

  • Offering suggestions on how to close the narrative distance and go into a deeper POV when needed

  • Ensuring scenes are well-organized and match a clear timeline

  • Writing a multi-page editorial letter detailing strengths and weaknesses and how to fix big-picture issues

Copyediting

Rate: $0.02–$0.035 per word

Deals with word- and sentence-level issues. My copyediting service includes stylistic editing, what some call line editing.

  • Correcting mechanical issues: spelling, capitalization, and punctuation

  • Correcting all errors and infelicities in grammar, syntax, and usage

  • Rewriting any wordy or awkward sentences according to best writing practices

  • Conducting light fact-checking, names, places, dates (Complete fact-checking is the responsibility of the author.)

  • Creating a style sheet to ensure consistency in punctuation and style preferences as well as character facts

  • Pointing out and offering suggestions to fix info dumping and head-hopping

  • Ensuring dialogue is true to the character and has a good balance of action beats when needed

  • Pointing out and offering suggestions to fix too much telling and not enough showing

Copyediting and Developmental Combined Package

Rate: $0.035–$0.065 per word

This combines copyediting and developmental editing in one round at a discounted rate. I offer this to help meet authors’ budget and deadline needs.

Note 1: While I strive for high quality, combining them is a lot to focus on at once. I do multiple passes and have learned how to appropriately prioritize to ensure a good quality. But you will get an even better quality if you pay for each service as a separate round.

Note 2: This does not include formatting, proofreading, or designing the cover. I will suggest colleagues to contact for those services.

Manuscript Checkup

Rate: $500

A bridge service for authors who want professional feedback to help guide their self-editing and save time and money before getting full editing or submitting to an agent.

  • Professional edits on the first 10k words

  • 45-minute one-on-one coaching call teaching you how to edit for the top two specific craft techniques your manuscript needs

  • Feedback for one self-revised chapter after the coaching call so you know you’re applying the craft techniques well

After this service, you’ll have sharper writing and a roadmap for finishing your self-edits, making the full editing process smother and cheaper.  Plus, you’ll grow as a writer. After all, good writing is rewriting!

Proofreading

Rate: $0.016 per word

Proofreading is only available for manuscripts that have been professionally edited by Beacon Point, as this doesn’t replace editing. If you opt to use our proofreading service, your manuscript will be proofread by a member of the proofreading team. You can opt for a specific person if you want.

Meet my proofreading team.

  • Correct errors with grammar, spelling, punctuation, and usage

  • Correct any formatting errors

  • Comment on, but not correct, any phrasing that stands out in a bad way

  • Note any plot or continuity error

Note on Order:

Traditionally, proofreading comes after interior book design/formatting, so proofreader can also check for design errors.

However, this is more expensive, as you then have to pay the formatter or proofreader to implement the changes into the formatted manuscript.

Beacon Point offers proofreading either before formatting or after formatting.

Katie Chambers sitting on a sofa, holding a file and a pen, looking at the camera

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Just click the button below, and let’s start writing your future.

Portfolio

Total to date: 73 fiction books, 11 Adult Fiction (1 mystery, 3 thriller, 6 dystopian, 1 sci-fi), 11 Young Adult (2 fantasy, 3 dystopian, 6 supernatural), 6 Middle Grade, 8 Chapter Books, and 38 Picture Books

Paladins Sin: Clash of the Viatores2025-03-19T17:58:46+00:00
Traveler, Viator’s Challenge: A YA Urban Fantasy (Chosen Defender Series, Book Two)2025-03-19T17:59:19+00:00
Little Pumpkin Discovers the Big World2025-03-19T17:59:47+00:00

Not Yet Published Titles

Adult novels

  • Fletcher Boone, Motor City Episode 1 

  • Witch’s Tiddy Beer

  • Tiddy Twister Beer

Young adult novels

  • Dread of the Land

  • Traveler, Paladin’s Deception

  • Paladin’s Redemption

  • Heart of a Rogue

  • Oath of mercy: The Palace of Pride

Middle-grade & chapter books

  • Stonecavern

  • We’re Never Far Apart

  • Newest Member of the Club

  • The Choice

Picture books

  • Katie Lou and Maxie Mike’s Dragon Adventure

  • Katie Lou and Maxie Mike’s Wild West Adventure

  • Katie Lou and Maxie Mike’s Pirate Adventure

  • Serena’s Vision Board

  • Lola’s Balloon

  • How to Keep a Crocodile

  • Lambi Has the Bumps

  • Gavin, the Guide Giraffe

  • Simbi, the Multicultural Lion Cub

  • Wilbur B. Bunny and his Baby Sisters

  • Patrick, the Sun Conure Parrott, vs the Hawk

  • Flower Power

  • The Mahomes Have Our Cookies

  • Boo Bear’s Light

  • Little Pumpkin Makes New Friends